Oh, glad to have you there! The writing I plan to talk about on the filter is with an aim to be (one day!) published - so as thorough and as harsh as you have time and inclination would be hugely appreciated. Even if I don't get published, I do want to write 'properly' - for want of a better word.

I tend to keep this journal as by default a fannish one, so the non-filtered stuff will be the Stargate stuff, and the filtered will be the original fic.

:) Aw, I didn't expect you'd read my Stargate stuff - it'd be very boring and incomprehensible unless you know and love the characters involved. And that's the thing with fanfic - there's a lot of character and situation shorthands that just don't get explained, because anyone who knows the show doesn't need it, and anyone who doesn't know the show isn't likely to be reading.

Bring on the harsh and cruel crit! I can take it! *braces self* There is... stuff wrong with my writing, but I find it hard to pin down what.

(I need an s&m icon... *g*)