:) Aw, I didn't expect you'd read my Stargate stuff - it'd be very boring and incomprehensible unless you know and love the characters involved. And that's the thing with fanfic - there's a lot of character and situation shorthands that just don't get explained, because anyone who knows the show doesn't need it, and anyone who doesn't know the show isn't likely to be reading.

Bring on the harsh and cruel crit! I can take it! *braces self* There is... stuff wrong with my writing, but I find it hard to pin down what.

(I need an s&m icon... *g*)