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New fic: Heart Of Glass

  • Mar. 6th, 2007 at 11:16 PM
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This is not pirate fic! Dammit!


Title: Heart Of Glass
Author: Pepper
Rating: PG for swearage
Season: Pre-Stargate
Disclaimer: Characters aren't mine, blah blah blah.
Featured Character(s): Jack, Sara
Pairing(s): Jack/Sara
Summary: Jack slowed the bike to a crawl as he passed the woman for the third time, but she still didn't look up.
A/N: Prompt from [profile] vickyocean: "...how Jack met Sara." I'd tried to resist writing stories about Jack and Sara, but oh, a prompt... I couldn't fight it any longer.
 
Previous two new prompt fics here and here.
  
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Jack slowed the bike to a crawl as he passed the woman for the third time, but she still didn't look up. So he stopped, and let the engine idle, pushing down the kick-stand with his foot, propping one foot on the ground, and hoping to hell that the wind hadn't blown his brown hair into some freaky formation, and that he looked cool, in a James Dean kinda way. At least he'd put on his best leather jacket this morning - that had been a stroke of luck. "Hey!" he called. She still didn't look up. "HEY!" At last she glanced up, and he composed his face into his most charming smile. "Hi."
 
She looked blankly at him through large, concealing sunglasses. "Uh, hi." She pushed back a stray strand of dark blonde hair. The rest was back in a high ponytail, hooking slightly over one bared shoulder. The other shoulder was hidden in the depths of her bright red wide-neck sweater. He liked the look of that sweater. It had definite potential.
 
"You're kinda absorbed there, huh?" he asked, nodding at the book. She looked down at it, and back up again, a small frown appearing behind her sunglasses.
 
"Yeah," she said.
 
Man, this chick was hard work. But she also had long, long legs, in tight blue jeans, curled under her on the grass, and a tiny green-painted ghetto blaster playing tinny Debbie Harry. Besides, Jack O'Neill liked a challenge. "You at college here?" She looked a little older than the average college student, but it was a fair guess, given that she was parked outside on the college lawn, reading.
 
"Yeah," she said, and finally seemed to feel that her terseness might be construed as a bit rude. "Studying to become a teacher."
 
"Masters?" he asked, hoping to sound intelligent, or at least to flatter her. Apparently it didn't work, because she pressed her lips together and looked annoyed.
 
"Just a degree," she said, flatly.
 
Jack shoved a hand through his hair. Maybe it was too flat? Too windblown? "Uh, listen, I'm new in town, and was wondering if someone could tell me where the good nightspots are?" God, that was absolutely the lamest pickup line he'd ever come up with. But he was feeling a little intimidated by her sunglasses' blank stare.
 
She looked down, put a finger in her book to mark her place, and closed it - rather pointedly showing him that he'd interrupted her. "I dunno..." she said, hesitantly.
 
"Oh, you've gotta know somewhere," he said, cajolingly. "Where d'you like to go?"
 
She shrugged. "You wouldn't like it," she said.
 
"Hey, how d'you know what I wouldn't like?" he protested.
 
She looked up and looked him over, and smiled a small, frustratingly knowledgeable smile. "You just don't look like it'd be your kinda place," she said, gently. Jack instantly had a mental image of a startlingly sophisticated, avant-garde sort of establishment, serving coffee and cocktails, and crammed full of lecturers in black berets, discussing Sartre. Which, if he was honest, really wasn't his sort of place, but damned if he was going to admit that to this frustrating woman.
 
"I might surprise you," he said, instead.
 
She caved at last. "The Blue Lagoon," she confessed. "It's on the corner of First and St Helena's."
 
Jack grinned. "That wasn't so hard, now, was it?" he said, chidingly. "Now the hundred-dollar question: When are you next going there?"
 
She gave him what was probably a hard stare. "Are you asking me on a date?" she asked, point-blank.
 
"Yes," he said, equally as baldly - fed up of beating around the bush, and deciding he might as well just find out there and then whether she was going to turn him down.
 
"Tomorrow. Nine PM," she said, in a rush.
 
Wow. He blinked at her for a moment, not sure if he'd heard correctly. "Tomorrow?"
 
"Nine PM," she confirmed.
 
"I'll be there," he said, quickly. He kicked the kick-stand away, and fumbled blindly at the ignition for a moment before realising that he hadn't turned it off. He revved the bike, and then remembered something. "Oh! What's your name?"
 
She looked up from the book she'd opened again. "Sara," she said.
 
He nodded to her. "Sara. See you tomorrow, Sara," he said. "Nine PM."
 
He kept one eye on her in the mirror as he drove away. She was watching him. She was definitely watching him.
 
---
 
"Oh my god. Oh my fucking god."
 
Once he'd disappeared, Sara closed the book, and collapsed back onto the grass, tugging off her sunglasses and staring at the sky. The most gorgeous man she'd ever seen in her entire life had just asked her on a date. To the goddamn Blue Lagoon, of all places - the most run-down, cheesy student bar in the history of student bars. Why, why hadn't she said she liked someplace cooler?
 
Well, obviously because her brains had dribbled out of her ears when he'd given her that little Rebel Without A Cause grin. Fuck. This was going to be such a disaster. What the hell had he wanted with her - mousy Sara Reeves, with her medium-color hair and her medium-blue eyes, and her medium grade looks?
 
Oh god. She hadn't got a thing to wear. Well, she had plenty that was appropriate for going to the Blue Lagoon, but unfortunately nothing that was appropriate for going out with such a slice of handsomeness. On a motorbike. Christ.
 
She slapped a hand to her face. She needed backup, and she needed it now.
 
Shit, and she'd completely forgotten to ask his name.
 
---
 
By half-past nine, Major Jack O'Neill was beginning to feel like a complete loser. He stared morosely around the Blue Lagoon - which had turned out not be half as intimidating as he'd expected - and wondered if she'd agreed to meet him just to get rid of him, or if she'd decided later that he wasn't worth the-
 
"Hi, I'm so sorry I'm late, I spilled nail varnish everywhere, and my dad called, and then traffic was awful..."
 
He looked up, startled, in the middle of swigging his beer, and half of it went down the wrong way. Coughing half his drink over the table proved, fortunately, to be an effective ice-breaker, and he discovered within a short space of time that she had a lovely smile, blue eyes that sparkled when she laughed, and a similar sense of humour to his own. And she looked goddamn gorgeous in that electric blue dress that clung in all the right places. Yeah. It was even better than the red sweater.
 
She looked startled when he casually let drop his rank, and explained that he hadn't come across as the military type. When he'd enquired further, she surprised him by telling him her version of events - which was totally different from how he'd perceived it. He smirked at her when she'd confessed she'd been tongue-tied by the gorgeous guy on a motorbike. She rolled her eyes, and laughed at them both.
 
By midnight, he was head over heels.
 
Eight weeks later, they were married.
 
Two years after that, they had a baby boy.
 
And eleven years after that, Jack returned to an empty house from the most astonishing mission of his life, and stood in the hall, staring at the depopulated coat rack, wondering where half his life had gone.
 
---
 
END.

Comments

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[identity profile] surreallis.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 7th, 2007 02:27 am (UTC)
It's almost too sad to read Jack/Sara like this, because you know what will happen to them eventually.

I could SO see it happening like this though. Because you KNOW Sara gave him a hard time at first. He likes that. ;)

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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 7th, 2007 09:55 am (UTC)
It made me kinda sad to write - back when they were young and carefree... *sniff*

And yeah - Jack's totally a sucker for strong women. *g*
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[identity profile] holdouttrout.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 7th, 2007 02:48 am (UTC)
Awww...that's just so cute, and sad. But I love it.
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 7th, 2007 09:57 am (UTC)
Ta! *hugs teh hot that is carefree!Jack*
[identity profile] vickyocean.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 15th, 2007 03:24 pm (UTC)
Yay! You wrote me Jack and Sara meeting. Sorry it took me so long to read it.

It's wonderful and funny! I love Jack worrying about his hair. You caught to early '80s vibe too. IMO, the small details about the music and clothes adds so much to the story.

I've never been much of a Jack/Sara shipper after the series started, but I so want Jack to have been happy in his marriage to her. He deserved some happiness.
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 15th, 2007 03:34 pm (UTC)
Ah, knew you were busy. *g* Glad you liked! Yeah, I love writing that 80s stuff - I did something else set back then a while ago, and it was just fun to write.

I couldn't resist that prompt. I'm not a Jack/Sara shipper exactly, but... well... Sara's my real name. *g*

(And, weirdly, it seems to crop up a lot in shows I like as the ex-girlfriend/wife's name. Twice in SG-1, in fact.)
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[identity profile] abyssinia4077.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 5th, 2007 12:16 am (UTC)
!!!!
YOU ARE SO MEAN

That was really adorable and cute and sweet and funny and cute and wonderful and did I mention cute? (and oh so 80s)

and then BAM that last sentence hit like a giant bag of bricks.

*squishes Jack and Sara tight*
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 5th, 2007 12:31 am (UTC)
I sort of wanted to write more, see - but then I wanted to finish it, too, and not have it turn into the epic I had in my head, which would never get finished. So I feel I sort of cheated with that ending...

Anyhow, it's Stargate that's mean. They did that to him. So nyer. *g*

I loved writing the 80s stuff. It was fun trying to pitch it so it was noticeable, but without clubbing people over the head with pop-culture references. I've written stuff before set in the 80s, and it was just... I love writing it. *shrugs*

So that's four people who've read it... :D (Insofar as I can tell, anyhow.)
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[personal profile] paian wrote:
Jun. 5th, 2007 08:26 pm (UTC)
Found this through the link in [livejournal.com profile] abyssinia4077's comments, and I'm so glad. I love Jack/Sara fic, but I've seen hardly any about how they met. I love this. And the gut punch at the end as much as the whole charming fic that leads up to it, because, yeah. Exactly.
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 5th, 2007 08:40 pm (UTC)
Hee, cool. I should pimp my fic around a little more, huh? *g*

I just imagine Jack, when he got back from that first trip through the Gate, would really, really have wanted share that experience with someone. Even though, of course, it wouldn't be allowed... But the excitement of having gone to an alien world - Jack only had that the one time, and there was no one at home he could have talked to. Aw. And she was his wife... a big part of his life, we presume. Big changes for him at that moment.

Glad you liked! Damn, I really want to write more Jack/Sara now...
paian: blank white (Default)
[personal profile] paian wrote:
Jun. 5th, 2007 08:43 pm (UTC)
I really want to write more Jack/Sara now -- Ooh, good to hear!

And I can so see that, about him wanting to share it, with her in particular, and how brutally silent everything must have seemed, when she wasn't there to tell. Gah.
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 5th, 2007 08:56 pm (UTC)
Oh! Yes, poor Jack. And he'd probably have alienated pretty much everyone at that point - and it seemed like he didn't see Kawalsky or Feretti again until COTG, so it's just him, and his empty house, and the biggest secret in the world.

I wonder what he did in the however long it's supposed to be before the film and the series.
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[personal profile] paian wrote:
Jun. 5th, 2007 09:01 pm (UTC)
Really good question. I suspect that he massively isolated -- didn't go out much, spent a lot of time on the stargazing deck with the telescope. Maybe brooding, maybe healing, maybe both. Did he already have the house in Colorado Springs, since his and Sara's house was in Winter Park? Or did he acquire the house during that year? So much room there for fic to fill in!
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 5th, 2007 09:13 pm (UTC)
Yeah... a lot of time just... well, not shooting himself in the head. Gradually getting further from that, on his own terms and in his own way, asking no help from anyone. Very Jack.

Hmm to the house thing. I think I picture him as coming back to the family home to find Sara has moved out to live with her dad for a while, and left him a note asking him to move out. And it's a kind note, and he knows that it makes more sense for her to live there, because she's spent more time there, it's more her home than his, etc, but it still hurts.

And I think he then finds the house from the series by a speedy, lucky chance, but he's not really in a state to care much about that until a lot later.

Ow. This is all terribly sad stuff, you know.
paian: blank white (Default)
[personal profile] paian wrote:
Jun. 5th, 2007 11:23 pm (UTC)
I picture him coming back to his and Sara's house exactly that way ... and holding it together while he kind of stumbles away from his life, and then ending up in the Springs one way or another. Maybe kind of a 'lost year' for Jack? Gah, it is really sad!

I do hope you write more Jack-and-Sara, that would be wonderful. :-)
[identity profile] princessofg.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 11th, 2007 02:52 am (UTC)
*weeps*

thank you. this part is just so hard; and yet it made jack what he is. sigh. no words.

(paian pointed this out to us.)
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 11th, 2007 07:36 pm (UTC)
Aw, I'm glad you liked. His life with Sara was a big part of what Jack is, like you say - and yet it's sort of off the radar a bit. I hadn't realised I was a Jack/Sara shipper until I wrote this fic. *g*

(And, ooh! *glees at being recced*)

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