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Ficlet: P is for Peridot (G, Jack/Sara)

  • Oct. 27th, 2008 at 9:44 PM
pepper: Pepperpot (JackSara familiar)
Title: P is for Peridot
Author: Pepper
Rating: G
Wordcount: 331
Featured Character(s): Jack, Sara
Summary: "...my favorite color is peridot..."
A/N: For [livejournal.com profile] sg_fignewton's Jack's Alpha-Bits.

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"This? But it's—" He wanted to say 'snot green', but was wary of the menacing way she was brandishing the roller. From the way her eyes narrowed, though, he was pretty sure she'd read his mind. He really wished she wouldn't do that.

"It's peridot," said Sara, sharply. "It's gender-neutral."

"But he's a boy," said Jack, before he could stop himself.

"That's not the point, Jack. I've explained this."

Yes, she had. She really had. Unfortunately, she'd been talking in New Mom, and he'd been listening in Old Dad. He couldn't help it: in a couple of months he – they – were going to have a son. He wanted to take the kid fishing, play catch, build him a treehouse, and line his bedroom with the most taste-free collection of sports memorabilia Jack could lay his hands on. It seemed to be completely beyond his conscious control, something he'd absorbed as what you do.

Sara, on the other hand, had Plans. She'd been reading an endless supply of books and magazines about how to bring your kid up right, and whilst he was infinitely grateful that she'd not followed through with her threat to get them on tape and play them on a loop in his car stereo, he couldn't help feeling like they were impinging on the natural order of things. Parenthood didn't have to be planned like a military campaign, surely? It was just... instinctive.

Besides, he still wasn't seeing how wall paint came into it.

Sara took a deep breath. "We're not gonna paint the whole room this color," she said, and waved at the tins of paint. "Just one wall, and the woodwork." She stared at him, and bit the inside of her lip. "You'll love it, once you get used to it." Jack squinted dubiously at her. "We'll tell him it's slime-colored," she sighed.

Jack brightened. Well, when she put it like that... "Okay, then!"

Sara rolled her eyes. But, Jack thought, in a loving way.
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END.

Comments

[identity profile] naelany.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 27th, 2008 10:15 pm (UTC)
*sniggers* Cute
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 30th, 2008 09:54 am (UTC)
Thanks! I try. *g*
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[identity profile] holdouttrout.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 27th, 2008 10:23 pm (UTC)
Oh, goodness. It's so adorable! Jack would be exactly like that. :-)
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 30th, 2008 09:55 am (UTC)
Hee - the funny thing is, I thought to myself, "How would I persuade A to like green paint?", and this is the argument I came up with. :D
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[personal profile] paian wrote:
Oct. 27th, 2008 10:27 pm (UTC)
::loves!::
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 30th, 2008 09:56 am (UTC)
Aw, thank you! Oh, man, your icon, it is gorgeous.
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[personal profile] paian wrote:
Oct. 31st, 2008 03:02 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I loved the happiness that screencap captured. Totally shareable if you've a mind to snag.
[identity profile] kalquessa.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 27th, 2008 10:33 pm (UTC)
Bwah! This is awesome!!

Unfortunately, she'd been talking in New Mom, and he'd been listening in Old Dad.

That cracked me up. As did "We'll tell him it's slime-colored." Oh, Sara. You know Jack so well.
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 30th, 2008 09:59 am (UTC)
Hee, thanks! I can't help it, I think Jack is too cute. :)
[identity profile] rihansu.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 27th, 2008 11:24 pm (UTC)
Aww! Very sweet. Love those two.
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 30th, 2008 10:00 am (UTC)
Aren't they cute? *squishes them* Thank you!
[identity profile] supplyship.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 27th, 2008 11:40 pm (UTC)
Wow. This gives whole new and angsty meaning to that "my favorite color is peridot" line in Heroes! *wibble*

Really sweet little snapshot from the Jack and Sara years.
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 30th, 2008 10:01 am (UTC)
I fixated on that line, you see - MY favourite colour is peridot. *g* But I can't see it being something Jack liked, so I felt there should be an explanation. Et voila! *g*

Thank you! I do enjoy writing those two.
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[identity profile] abyssinia4077.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 27th, 2008 11:49 pm (UTC)
OMG YOU WROTE SARA YAY!!!!!

*breathes*
*calms down*

I love the idea of their different approaches to parent-hood and Jack being a big overwhelmed by it and the giving a reason to the random favorite color that works so well and, oh, oh, Sara! Jack! Soon-to-be-Charlie!
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 30th, 2008 10:10 am (UTC)
Yay Sara! Every now and then I get the urge to write her. :) Yeah, I picture Sara as having some fairly progressive ideas - at least, not wildly progressive, but at least trying to bring Charlie up to be a good human being - and Jack agreeing in principle (and maybe feeling that Sara kind of has more say in it, as he's not always around), but in practice, he kind of has these dreams of dad-hood, all camping and fishing and endless summer holidays... :)
[identity profile] rdamel.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 28th, 2008 03:27 am (UTC)
Ah-- a reason at last for Jack liking peridot--it's slime colored, what boy (or man) could resist that reasoning?!

Melissa M.
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 30th, 2008 10:11 am (UTC)
Exactly! I beta-tested it on my guy, and he was absolutely sold on slime-colour. *g* Thank you!
[identity profile] suzannemarie.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 28th, 2008 03:42 am (UTC)
Aw, this is so sweet. And what a nice tie between peridot and his past.
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 30th, 2008 12:22 pm (UTC)
:D Thanks! Yeah, I thought there should be a story there. RDA chose it because he thought it was funny, of course, but... :)
[identity profile] shinysilvergrl.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 28th, 2008 02:24 pm (UTC)
*grumble*
BlahJack/SaraBlah.

But heh @ Jack anyway. :)
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 30th, 2008 12:23 pm (UTC)
Re: *grumble*
Hee. Well, if it's any consolation, I've been working on Sam/Jack WIPs since this. ;D
[identity profile] shinysilvergrl.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 31st, 2008 05:10 am (UTC)
whee!
I see you've updated one here. I'm hoping to have time to read it (it'll take a bit, because I'll want to re-read from the beginning, since I only have a vague memory of that particular fic...) this weekend. :)
[identity profile] samantilles.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 28th, 2008 02:52 pm (UTC)
Interesting way to show off his favorite color!! *is thoughtful now*--love the slime part also--Jack is completely a five year old!!
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 30th, 2008 12:28 pm (UTC)
He so is. It's part of his charm. *g* Thank you! I felt there was potential fic in that line, so I took it and ran with it. :)
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[identity profile] aurora-novarum.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 28th, 2008 04:31 pm (UTC)
Oh how sweet! And...wow...taking something so mundane and making it so hope and angst and Aw!
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 30th, 2008 12:55 pm (UTC)
Aw, ta! It's a line that grabbed me, for some reason - it would be typical of Jack, I think, to make reference to something obscure, not expecting the other person to get it. He's got half a lifetime behind him already, by the time the show starts, so I feel he'd often be thinking of things we don't know about.
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[personal profile] lilyleia78 wrote:
Oct. 29th, 2008 06:20 am (UTC)
::hee, hee:: Poor Sara. So that's where Jack got to recognize the affectionate eye roll his team employs so well.

BTW - August baby here. Peridot rules!
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 30th, 2008 12:58 pm (UTC)
Hee, thanks! Yes, I was always quite jealous of that as a birthstone (mine's diamond, which is colourless and too expensive to own).

And, heh - I suspect Jack has been on the receiving end of eyerolls for most of his life. *g*
[identity profile] annienau08.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 3rd, 2008 04:07 am (UTC)
Hee! They are so cute!

*categorically refuses to think about the way it's all going to end*
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[identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 3rd, 2008 04:35 pm (UTC)
*pets them* Heh, thank you.

*categorically refuses to think about the way it's all going to end*

The exact attitude I took when writing it. :)
[identity profile] colej55.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 9th, 2008 04:31 am (UTC)
A brilliant ficlet that does a lovely job of giving us a glimpse of the joy of anticipation! And the sense of humor between them was lovely. Nice!
[identity profile] notadate.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 12th, 2008 10:54 pm (UTC)
Aw! Very cute. :)
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[personal profile] nandamai wrote:
Mar. 11th, 2009 06:32 pm (UTC)
Read this when you posted it and am finally clearing out my tabs. (A hopeless quest.) But ANYWAY. Very nice Jack/Sara. I love your version of them. And awwwww, peridot!

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