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[pepper]

Help...

Could someone with some knowledge of how the Air Force / US military works have a look at my fic? It's the latest in the Valentines series (so be warned - Sam/Jack ahead), and I want to know if I've got the wrong end of the stick about something - and if I have, I need someone to maybe hit me over the head with the right end of the stick. I don't think in-depth knowledge is required, more just what would be... well, customary, I guess.

*looks appealing*

Comments

[vickyocean.livejournal.com]

I could take a look at if you want. My dad was in the Air Nat'l Guard and I was in the Air Force ROTC. I still have my manuals and some of my dad's stashed some where. If you want me to look at it you can send it here:

vicky_ocean11 at yahoo dot com

[pepper-field.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Just emailed.

Funny, I came back from posting a prompt on your lj (I finally thought of one - well, two) to find your post on mine. :D

[splash-the-cat.livejournal.com]

There's also military_beta, a group just for military related fic questions.

[pepper-field.livejournal.com]

Oh! Thank you, that's very useful. *bookmarks immediately*

[surreallis.livejournal.com]

I'll take a look too if you want. I was never in, but I've learned some things from the husband and from my last fandom. :)

jennghiskahn at gmail

[pepper-field.livejournal.com]

Ooh... I might just do that. Only I've never had two betas before, and the idea is somewhat decadent. *g*